Talk:Surprise precure Party!/@comment-25941521-20180305195024

While the story seems interesting, it is very unstructured.

Maybe if you seperated the headings so it is not a run on text, it would look better. Here is what I mean:

 Cures  Nijino Okashiro/Cure Funny: A cheerfull girl that loves making jokes and making people laugh. [...] Her topic desings are a Clowns and a Skater.

Amai Satouno/Cure sweetie: A conceited and selfish girl that thinks that everything she does is good. [...]. her topic desings are a Maid and Waitress.

Yoake Kumiko/Cure Dawn: A responsable girl [...]a Muse.

just an idea though.