User blog:Pretty Dream/Is this the right translation?

Okay, judging from the title, I want to know if the song I wrote is translated correctly into Japanese. So anyone who knows Japanese, can you please tell me if it is right. If it isn't, can you tell me the right translation for the lines that were wrong?

BTW, I used Google Translate to translate it into Japanese and I'm just wondering if Google Translate made some mistakes. This is also the opening song for my series Pretty Cure Dreaming Elements! and I am also wondering if the lyrics are good enough for the series.