Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-5255288-20140717215311/@comment-5255288-20150413012051

Skipping CureHotaru's Setsuko because she doesn't have a character page.

Cure Lucky/Shibuki Hoshiko:

Needs Work:

Again, so many hobbies. Why all the hobbies? Besides that, all the catchphrases. Can she use that many? Also, cheerful people don't come off as cynical often. How bad does trouble have to get when Hoshiko can't get out of it? How many people have stopped hanging around her due to her agressive nature? Heck, why is all of the team still with her?

She can't handle stupidity - so when we have brain farts, does she storm off? These are traits that aren't good for a team member. And if she's so insecure inside, how does she keep that cool? It doesn't make any sense - the bio makes it look like you threw in the insecurities for the heck of it. What is she insecure about? Such an intelligent girl would be able to not be so sad if she's so good at getting out of trouble.

How does she reveal her helpful side? Who sees it? Who gets close enough to find it revealed?

Some traits and hobbies can be cut from Hoshiko, if you ask me. Miyazaki's thing about focusing on certain traits may help. It might also help to think of an aspiration for Hoshiko - does she slave towards it? Fantasize about it? What does she think of people who get in the way of it/don't approve? People who approve? People who are sickeningly better at it? Try it and let's see what you come up with.