Thread:Aijihi/@comment-5920426-20161122042929/@comment-27636373-20161122054651

Well, don’t false advertise to someone you’ve told the plot to before, first of all. It won’t work and looks bad.

Secondly, dark does not equal a good story. It doesn’t make a story bad automatically, but it’s something to be handled with care, not this “look at all this suffering and death” attitude you seem to have with it. It needs to have a purpose and justified reason, or else you just look like and edgelord, and the story itself is unappealing at best. And it’s not like my art will make your story any better. Your story has to stand on its own merits, not one half-decent piece of art.