Thread:SAYkokoro/@comment-34500634-20190106000945/@comment-25226363-20190107044307

Gokigen'yō! (Good day) Rufus-chan :3 Thank you so much for messaging me. It means the world! Any way I can help a fellow Pretty Cure fan >~<

I took a look at Cheers Pretty Cure! and I think your logo is so cute, Rufus-chan :3 I also really like the name choses for Cure Lucky, Cure Smile, and Cure Joy. I've actually been throwing around a character too named Cure Joy : ) I love the artwork look and your Pretty Cure's designs and the mascot are adorable! I honestly get a Happiness Charge Pretty Cure vib from the Cures like the International Cures they have in their series.

I also love the idea of the PreBrushes, I think that's really cool and very PreCure like. I can pictures that being an actual transformation item on the show!

With my critiques, you don't have to take it to heart, it's important to not let someone sway you from your ambition or plan. And, also, that this is just purely my personally opinion.

If I were to make one critique, it would be to be careful with making too many characters just cause it might be a little harder to remember them all. I also think that the planet-theme is the series is a bit out of place. Maybe obmit it completely and stay focused on the themes of the importance of joy, smiles, and luck. This is also just my personal opinion, I like that Cassie, Gracie, and Will are from Texas and have English names, I'm a bit more old-fashioned and prefer Japanese names and living in Japan, but I appreciate that just cause it's anime doesn't mean that have to be Japanese (back to how they're like the International Cures).

I know when I made my Wikia, I would read off the offical Pretty Cure wikia and try to copy the way they talk about the Cures and characters to make it look like it just came off the real wikia.

Anyways, I really love your idea with the motifs of joy, smiles, and luck and can see each Cure, Cassie, Gracie, and Will struggle with all three of these. Cassie struggling with finding what makes her happy and the bittersweet side of happiness. Gracie (who I honestly can relate to) learning to drop her guard, let her hair down, and learn the power of a smile and how it effects. And Will for gaining his confidence, seeing what makes him special, and how lucky he is to be himself and that him, maybe being a Pretty Cure wasn't a mistake.

I hope this helps : )

If you have any more questions or even want to bounce ideas off me, please don't hesitate to ask. From one writer to another, I'd be more than happy to help, Rufus-chan :D