Talk:Dreamlight precure/@comment-25708364-20150606130436/@comment-5255288-20150719205051

I would be happy to look at the plot, Lilylight but as per wiki policy, you really should fix the grammar on this page. Please end your sentences with periods and capitalize the 'precure' in the page's title. It would help me and any other readers a lot!

That aside, the plot as far as I can tell isn't anything new. Ayumi dreams about a girl fighting monsters, she meets someone, this one turns into a monster and she fights. Meh. Don't be afraid to make something out of the ordinary!

In the plot section, you're even putting in content that should be saved for the episodes! The plot section is to give your readers a basic idea of what's going on. If you'd like an example of how that works, I'll direct you to something I've been working on with some other users: Diverse Connections Pretty Cure!. Readers know what the theme is, the setting and the threat that the Pretty Cure will be fighting yet when it comes to the actual episodes they won't have known anything beforehand. You could try that.

On an unrelated note, I think Ayumi's character should be tinkered with a bit. I don't find her very exciting at all to be frank - all I know is that she wan'ts to be an idol. Why an idol? Why does she represent faith and honesty?

Also, who's Michiko? Your blue Cure is a girl named Megan, yes? Oh, and what's the theme of this Pretty Cure fanseries? Why is it called Dreamlight?

That's mostly all I have to say about your series. I hope I helped you!