Thread:CureHibiki/@comment-6078077-20160816131914/@comment-25034020-20160903101431

"Once, I can show you what our powers" is an awkward sentence. It would be better if "Once" wasn't there, unless you explain why it's there? I may have to change the way you structure the paragraphs when I translate it as "They become a miracle!" will end up being "Mirakuru/Kiseki ni naru yo!" (you gonna have to tell me what sounds like English and what become full on Jap). But they aren't the only lines. Demo translation (without "Once"):

''Tobou suru, kono sekai wa ore no mono! Chiisai kamo shirenai ga, dekiru no, Sorera wo awasereba anata/kimi no chikara ga dekiru ka'' (What our powers can do if we combine them) watashi wa anata/kimi wo miru koto wo. (I can you show you) Mirakuru/kiseki ni naru yo!

''Bouken no sekai wa, koko de kuru yo! Ookina mono wa abunai toki ni, Chiisai mono wa tasukeru ni kite!''

"The" at the end of that sentence should just go on the same line as "Small come to the rescue!"...other wise...it looks weird XD Also, you can pick rather they sing "anata" or "kimi". They both mean you. XD