Talk:Artsy *Precure/@comment-37855715-20200120182314

Here is some critique.

The names, they just sound weird. Yes, I know what you're going for, but try for some better names to convey a better meaning. While most personalities are quite original, you can tell that some parts are a copy-paste, like how Aki is "socially-akward" like Tsubomi, and other blatant things. However this series isn't horrible and this is your first series, try to take some things into note. That's all!