Thread:CureHibiki/@comment-6078077-20160905113808/@comment-25034020-20160912014031

Okay~ I'm just changing something here as...I can't excess/access the document at school >.< (And we're not doing much in class anyway XD)

''Rubellit and Otoha appear in the studio, standing in front of the microphone with their headphones on. Rubellit starts singing and Otoha looks at her in surprise, wondering how she can stay so calm. As Otoha starts singing, the scene changes to the others. Miwa is standing outside the window, silently rooting for Otoha as Reimu tries to concentrate on reading the article on her phone. Miwa appears to remember something and runs off. Sapphire listens to music as she helps Topaz find an interesting job on her phone. Similar to Reimu, Low is reading a book but doesn't get too distracted by Miwa as she has left the room. Diamond lays her head on his shoulder, cuddling up to him and joins in reading the book''.

So what I changed is in bold XD Reimu was reading an article on her phone, not some book XD Hmm, what is Ruby and the other Sky Cures not mentioned doing? I feel like at the end, we should cut to everyone moving outside as Miwa and her mother runs down the street with the milkshakes XD