Talk:Sailor Suit Pretty Cure/@comment-1609005-20130830230759

Look, I'm not trying to be mean, or harsh, or anything. I'm just saying that if you're doing a Pretty Cure fanseries, or even a fanwork in general, inspired by something else, it's okay to borrow a few elements from it, but not nearly everything.

I can tell you're trying to make it different by tweaking and adding a few more things, such as other personality traits for the main characters (I actually like that Not!Usa-- I mean, Bunny can play guitar), but everything else just reeks of copy-and-paste from Sailor Moon, even the story of the unwanted earthling girl corrupted by the main villainess (Beryl's origin story in the manga is that she was in love with Endymion, but her love was unrequited).

Bottom line is that I'm not insulting her -- I'm just saying that she should learn to make the story stand on its own feet rather than using another work as a crutch.