Talk:Precure beach time/@comment-37855715-20190612014533

" long away in the pisific ocean theres an island called seaside island allways tropcal and ocupied by animals and an 5 all animal team caled team sonic they are the best they allways save the day from dr eggman and the robots but. they sometimes get beaten. one night all 5 nembers were kidnaped. one of the cidasons of the island got turned into a fariy and found 5 beutful sisters who live there. now the 5 sisters must save team sonic and pratect the island from eggman and his robots. the sisters are another 5 all anamal team caled precure beach time😎😎😎"

That is one long sentence.

Fixing: "A long way to go in the Pacific Ocean, there is a island called Seaside Island. Seaside Island is always tropical and it is occupied by animals. There is a all animal team of five members called Team Sonic, who are regarded as the best, as they always save the island from Dr. Eggman and his robots. But sometimes Eggman beats Team Sonic. One night, all 5 members were kidnapped. A citizen of the island was turned into a fairy and found five beautiful sisters who live at the island. Now, the five sisters must save Team Sonic and protect the island from Eggman and his robots. To do so, the sisters become another all animal team of five members, called Precure Beach Time."

Is that better?